Wow, I've never seen these two interact in a fic before. You got their voices down really well. Y'know, I bet Zexion and Luxord would have some really damn confusing conversations only the two of them would be able to make sense of. I mean, Mr. Bookish + Mr. Wordplay... Yyyeah.

also, is your icon a PoP reference? :D if so, that is awesomesauce.